70s Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 DJ Patrick- A+ A hysterical episode. Definitely the best yet. I loved Mango and the therapist briefly singing Bohemian Rhapsody (which is funny, since I think I'm using that in a future Bikini Top and I was just thinking of that while reading the episode), and then he sends her to an asylum because he is "lazy." And I love the note from "Fred." That part had me laughing extremely loud. Another line I loved was Patrick saying "What's cum?" And the reference to Bikini Top's newest episode was a definite plus in my book, as well as the big shock at the end where Mango commits suicide. A very funny episode that turned surprisingly dark at the end, but it felt natural as it did make the transition from laugh-out-loud to gaping. This was by far my favorite episode of Generation Patrick and of any show that you have ever written, and I very much look forward to more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 Rusty's Raping Rampage - A+++++ Awesome, simply awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 Fade to Black-A++++ What can I say about this episode? It had an outstanding music selection. Oh and the cliffhanger...amazing. Just amazing. This Bikini Top was spectacular. I read it three times, I loved it so much. Read it. Now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 Sea-Kaiser-A+ I FUCKING LOVED IT. Action-packed, suspensful, and I LOVED my character. GOOD JOB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Sponge Posted October 19, 2010 Share Posted October 19, 2010 Total Cartoon Island/Action: D+ This is my honest opinion on TCI/TCA. Well, it's a super crossover of Nicktoons, Total Drama version, great, but there's more. We know Sniz and Fondue host this show, and the characters' personalities are similar to the original TDI contestants. Stimpy, Owen. Rocko, Geoff? Sandy, Gwen. And a CIT Treeflower. What brings the family friendly TCI to its craziness, just wait and see. What I see the most in Season 1 of this spin-off is a bunch of RockoXReggie business, the Spandiness, Angelica being like Heather, and...fun during the publicity. Rocko, Spongebob, and some others...in the nude, maybe even Sniz. It then goes to the final two: Sandy and Stimpy, and of course, Stimpy takes the cup of Season 1. It crazy, weird, and suspenseful in one season, but still good for some kind of TDI parody. In the end, this season gets a C. Now, a lot of things have changed in Season 2, except the original contestants. Angelica is still bald, Sandy and Spongebob are still a couple, and Rocko, same old...whatever he does. What better way than to celebrate than 12 new contestants? What I hate the most...Blue Arrow wasn't improved correctly, but nice enough to put him in TCA. Cocky attitude, correct. Superhero? Incorrect. Who else is there?...Judy Funny, Rhonda Lloyd, with a personality of which I don't know, Gerald Fitzgerald(scuffles), Haggis McHaggis, Rancid Rabbit, Dog with a brand-new attitude, Marlene, Skipper, Pearl, in which Patrick has the hots for, Craig Mammalton, proven to be reasonable at this time, and an antagonist Larry. Spongebob Esquire and Gerald Fitzgerald I'm confused with. With that, call these characters Judy Arrow, Reggie the wallaby, or Dog IhateCatsomuchhurrdurr, endless possibilities. First episode of Season 2, was it a win or a fail? #1. Blue Arrow still isn't "right." Gee, I wonder what would happen if you wanted Strezz Stormond, and what relationship he would have. #2. More Rocko, once again, this is my opinion. #3. Starting with TCI, I realized something, TCI/A is a...I'm not going to say it, but it can still annoy me. Furthermore, this season gets a D- so far. This is more of an improvement type of review, so if you're here 4EverGreen, don't get offended. That was a mouthful...hopefully, USMI review coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 Bikini Top-Eet-A It was great...again. But I wish the scenes were a bit longer and more detailed. But it was still an awesome episode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 Bikini Top- The last 2 episodes have been awesome,you've really spiced Morgan storyline up! Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karen Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 Eet- A++++++++++++++++ Season 2 has beat Season 1's ass all the way so far, but this was just the nail in the coffin. awesome episode. Awesome music. The scenes were short, but like you told me, that was to make it feel urgent and fast-paced, which worked well. This episode needs to be nominated (and win) a spinoff award thing. Its that good. The cliffhangers were good, and I wish you would tell me where the hell you're going with all this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted October 22, 2010 Share Posted October 22, 2010 Changes - A A decent return to an awesome spin-off. But like you said, it was a little short. Shattered Memories - A+ Rarely do I feel any emotion while reading spin-offs, but I couldn't help but feel a twinge of sadness whenSpoilerRandy's father died. This is some great stuff, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted October 24, 2010 Share Posted October 24, 2010 Rusty's Raping Rampage- Funniest thing I ever read . Grade:A+++++ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted October 24, 2010 Share Posted October 24, 2010 Rusty's Raping Rampage - A It's not giving my eyes an orgasm or anything. But it's still great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
70s Posted October 29, 2010 Share Posted October 29, 2010 Dish Jockey: A+ Some of your best work, and definitely the best episode of this spin-off so far. It shows you had fun writing it, and I had fun reading it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minty Car Posted October 30, 2010 Share Posted October 30, 2010 Patrick's Big Break- A Really entertaining spin-off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deswim10 Posted November 1, 2010 Share Posted November 1, 2010 Undersea Mysteries-Incorporated-A Strong Spin-off. I've always been a fan of the mystery genre,if I do say so myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deswim10 Posted November 1, 2010 Share Posted November 1, 2010 Team Spongebob Ep.21 "Linda"- Great episode,I'm interested in the potential relationship between Linda and Spongebob. Great action also. Final Grade: A+ Team Spongebob :Ep.22 "Squid Vs. Pat" Not as good as "Linda",the ending felt rushed. Still,decent episode. Final Grade: B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Sponge Posted November 4, 2010 Share Posted November 4, 2010 Undersea Mysteries-Incorporated: A Rating Scale: Series Splicing: Check Originality: Check Cleanliness: Check Clothing: Check Lightning: Rain Check Characters: Check Similarities: Check Episodes: Check Villains: Check Episode Ratings: Beware the Beast From the Sea: A+ Creeping Eels: B Boat of Doom: B Revenge of the Lobster Man: A- Robot Rumble: B+ The Legend of Ginger Myers: A+ Musical Screams: B In Grasp of the Hunter: A+ (Will read the next ones soon) Overall Grade: A Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted November 4, 2010 Share Posted November 4, 2010 Undersea Mysteries-Incorporated: A Rating Scale: Series Splicing: Check Originality: Check Cleanliness: Check Clothing: Check Lightning: Rain Check Characters: Check Similarities: Check Episodes: Check Villains: CheckWhat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doogle. Posted November 15, 2010 Share Posted November 15, 2010 SpongeBoy-D. Sorry, I know it's harsh. It's just...well for one thing. THE PUNCTUATION. Sorry, but the lack of commas after the speech...Oh GOD it annoys me. I can't exactly blast you too much, since I'm not the best writer myself, and I'm going to be honest, there are enjoyable parts, but then there are bits such as Sally came in. "OUT. You bad kids." Sally screamed. Out you bad kids?! This isn't Yo Gabba Gabba. Parts are also very boring. I know it's a matter of opinion whether you find it interesting, but for me it just doesn't do it. Also, it's a bit similar to USMI. And when I say a bit, I really mean, a lot. I'm not the best at coming up with ideas either but yah making it less similar might make it easier to stop comparing. I don't mean to sound harsh, but this is just my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 SpongeBoy-D. Sorry, I know it's harsh. It's just...well for one thing. THE PUNCTUATION. Sorry, but the lack of commas after the speech...Oh GOD it annoys me. I can't exactly blast you too much, since I'm not the best writer myself, and I'm going to be honest, there are enjoyable parts, but then there are bits such as Sally came in. "OUT. You bad kids." Sally screamed. Out you bad kids?! This isn't Yo Gabba Gabba. Parts are also very boring. I know it's a matter of opinion whether you find it interesting, but for me it just doesn't do it. Also, it's a bit similar to USMI. And when I say a bit, I really mean, a lot. I'm not the best at coming up with ideas either but yah making it less similar might make it easier to stop comparing. I don't mean to sound harsh, but this is just my opinion. Well, the tone of SpongeBoy and USMI are extremely different from each other, while the plot of mystery solving isn't. Also, USMI is based off of Scooby Doo:MI , while SpongeBoy isn't, although inspiration came from the mystery solving aura of both shows. Thanks for the review though, I'll try to work on the errors you pointed out . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted November 17, 2010 Share Posted November 17, 2010 The Journey Of Sebastion - Episode 2: Spongebob's Plan: B+ I liked it. It seems like a lot of action is coming up. Don't dissapoint . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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