Jjs Goodman Posted April 10, 2010 Share Posted April 10, 2010 The End Review: A++ This was an awesome series finale for The Misadventures, 70s. Shame it is ending though. But i still enjoyed it and what happened to Patrick and co. Can't wait for the Movie though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Sponge Posted April 11, 2010 Share Posted April 11, 2010 Fred the Jellyfish(so far): B+ Not bad for a crossover. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
70s Posted April 18, 2010 Share Posted April 18, 2010 To the Maxx! (so far): D I would be easier on you, but it seems like you make a new spin-off every other week anyways. So here's what I say, find one, and stick to it. I don't like this one, so I don't think it should be the one to stick to. It has a few minor typos, and it's too hard to follow sometimes. I may have a small brain and a short attention span, but I really think I'm not the only one having this problem. So needless to say, improvements need to be made to this show. Super Spy Sponge (so far): F This really has potential to be an... average... show. The plot isn't very interesting to me. You already did something similar to it, which also didn't work well. Remember Secret Agent Snail? Yeah. You've made it more detailed, but it just doesn't work well. The way you post dialogue is weird, and once again, it's hard to follow, as is webizoid's new show. And I don't like that it's in first person, I feel like that could be a big obstacle in any show, especially a show with this type of plot. The characters are flat so far, as well. Major improvements are needed on this show, and since you're a pretty new spin-off creator, I don't know if you'll be able to make them. But I'll look out for future episodes to see if you follow my advice, and work to improve this show. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Webizoid Posted April 18, 2010 Share Posted April 18, 2010 SpoilerSpoilerTo the Maxx! (so far): D I would be easier on you, but it seems like you make a new spin-off every other week anyways. So here's what I say, find one, and stick to it. I don't like this one, so I don't think it should be the one to stick to. It has a few minor typos, and it's too hard to follow sometimes. I may have a small brain and a short attention span, but I really think I'm not the only one having this problem. So needless to say, improvements need to be made to this show. Super Spy Sponge (so far): F This really has potential to be an... average... show. The plot isn't very interesting to me. You already did something similar to it, which also didn't work well. Remember Secret Agent Snail? Yeah. You've made it more detailed, but it just doesn't work well. The way you post dialogue is weird, and once again, it's hard to follow, as is webizoid's new show. And I don't like that it's in first person, I feel like that could be a big obstacle in any show, especially a show with this type of plot. The characters are flat so far, as well. Major improvements are needed on this show, and since you're a pretty new spin-off creator, I don't know if you'll be able to make them. But I'll look out for future episodes to see if you follow my advice, and work to improve this show. Says a person who had 2 spin-offs until one ended. But whatever. I'll make improvements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Webizoid Posted April 18, 2010 Share Posted April 18, 2010 Super Spy Sponge (so far): B this is a pretty good show in my opinion. It is pretty hard to follow, like my show, whch i will explain some stuff later, what I have been planning to do all along (You hear that, 70s?). You are probbably going to do the same though. It's wierd how you Put (Name): "(Dialogue)" (name) said as he (action). Just stick to "(Dialougue)" said (name) as he (action). Other than that it seems pretty good. I wonder where he got the lions, and where's Karen? I guess I'm going to find out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 Golden Pearl episode 1: The Fight - C+ An okay start to the series, but the plot seemed a little repetitive, what with Pearl just going to different people for advice. But the plot of the show itself sounds interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 Golden Pearl-A Hey, I liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 SpoilerSpoilerGolden Pearl episode 1: The Fight - C+ An okay start to the series, but the plot seemed a little repetitive, what with Pearl just going to different people for advice. But the plot of the show itself sounds interesting. That was the point Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted April 21, 2010 Share Posted April 21, 2010 Dove Drunk-I just noticed that this episode has a similiar plot to an episode of seinfield. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted April 21, 2010 Share Posted April 21, 2010 Dragiiin's April Fool's Prank that he forgot to post on April Fool's Day A- Cool and funny! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted April 21, 2010 Share Posted April 21, 2010 Mermaidman: The Brave and The Bold - A- I'm a fan of this spin-off. I especially love the notes/trivia/goofs thing you do at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elastic Dawg Posted April 24, 2010 Share Posted April 24, 2010 EELZ WOWOWOWOWOW: 10/10 Best fucking spin-off ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted April 24, 2010 Share Posted April 24, 2010 Hitting Rock Bottom A+ 5 Stars I expected something different from this show but it still quenches my thirst for a Rock Bottom themed spin off. The show meets expectations, for it is in the comedy genre. In my opinion, it blows Bikini Top out of the water. I'm more of a comedic guy myself. Overall, the show is a hit, gaining 100 views after it's release. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted April 25, 2010 Share Posted April 25, 2010 Naomi the best person ever and Temperance is fuckin bullshit F---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- - tHIS SPINOFF SUCKS! NAOMI IS SHIT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted April 25, 2010 Share Posted April 25, 2010 This is a review of Dragiiin's Temperence is fucking beautiful and Naomi is shit. This show lacks everything...if he switches the names around, then it would work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted April 25, 2010 Share Posted April 25, 2010 SpoilerSpoilerThis is a review of Dragiiin's Temperence is fucking beautiful and Naomi is shit. This show lacks everything...if he switches the names around, then it would work. To bad Naomi is shit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted April 25, 2010 Share Posted April 25, 2010 Krusty Krab Years before-A I'll admit, not until recentley have I read this spinoff, and it's a nice idea. AND YES, JIM IS AWESOME. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jjs Goodman Posted April 25, 2010 Share Posted April 25, 2010 Generation Patrick Finale Review: A Nice finale Dragiiin. Sad to see it end so soon though. I'll miss Octi and the others. The ending was kinda funny even though it was meant to be sad. Can't wait to see what you have planned for your other spin-offs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted April 25, 2010 Share Posted April 25, 2010 Gen. Pat Final A- Awesome finale. I loved it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
70s Posted April 25, 2010 Share Posted April 25, 2010 Generation Patrick Finale: A+++++ My favorite episode of the show. Why? The music was great. But no, in all seriousness this episode was funny, while bringing back all the characters, and answering all the questions the show has left. There were sad moments as well, which were aptly written. I'll miss discussing this show with you, and can't wait to see what you have to offer next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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