Wumbo Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 ANYWAY... Team SpongeBob (so far): C It has a lot of action, but I think that the episodes are too short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExKizuna Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 Oh yeah, I was gonna review Team SpongeBob also. Team SpongeBob (so far): D- The episodes are WAAAAAY too short, in my opinion. And I would like a better story then "BOOM BOOM POW ACTION ACTION!" taking up a lot of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
70s Posted July 29, 2010 Share Posted July 29, 2010 SpoilerThere's a reason I'm doing a TMAS/Eelz crossover you know. When it was still on, everyone loved it but now people hate it. The heck? lolwut? Many people hated it while it was on. --- Team SpongeBob: F The episodes are extremely short. If these were actually broadcast, they would be less than five minutes long, if that. That is something you really want to avoid while crafting spin-offs. Another problem is that there is no emotion, and no character development. Just fighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 Team Spongebob-F STOP ASKING FOR REVIEWS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
70s Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 Tentacle Planet: A+ One of Futurdrama's funniest installments yet. I know you were experiencing the writer's block bug, and I'm sure this excellent episode got you out of that funk. It was packed with funny jokes, and there wasn't as much for me to correct as usual, to be honest. You should be proud of that, and I expect more good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 SpoilerTentacle Planet: A+ One of Futurdrama's funniest installments yet. I know you were experiencing the writer's block bug, and I'm sure this excellent episode got you out of that funk. It was packed with funny jokes, and there wasn't as much for me to correct as usual, to be honest. You should be proud of that, and I expect more good work. THANKS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karen Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 Congrats to Bubby0000. You have brought shame to names that sound similar to Bob Sponge's Atlantis - WTF There is absolutely no point to this show whatsoever except to show emoticons that hold signs, so it doesn't even deserve an actual letter grade. EPIC FAIL! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted August 2, 2010 Share Posted August 2, 2010 SpoilerTeam Spongebob-F STOP ASKING FOR REVIEWS! If that was directed at me..when have I ever demanded reviews? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted August 6, 2010 Share Posted August 6, 2010 Team Spongebob Look...you have AWESOME ideas and TS eps are action packed but just work on the structure on your writing. Grammar errors plague your eps and the eps would be around five minutes if they are actually aired. The only eps that CAN be short are if they're summary-type spin-offs. But yours in dialog driven. But if your writing can be better, your spin off will be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 SpoilerTeam Spongebob Look...you have AWESOME ideas and TS eps are action packed but just work on the structure on your writing. Grammar errors plague your eps and the eps would be around five minutes if they are actually aired. The only eps that CAN be short are if they're summary-type spin-offs. But yours in dialog driven. But if your writing can be better, your spin off will be better. Thanks for the advice . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 Social Status A- 4 Stars Still a pumping show, and it somewhat reminds me of Learning to Cope. The scene with Ed is a classic, and I enjoyed it. This episode wasn't a good as other episodes, but still satisfied me. I also enjoyed how Morticia apologized to The Wilsons-it was nice to see them getting along now. This episode was EXTREMELY vivid-I could just picture Vinnie smoking a cigarette after Lola storms upstairs. Good work, Wumbo. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 ?????? F STOP ASKING FOR REVIEWS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 But seriously, folks. ????? D Are you seriously gonna keep on churning out spinoffs that only have the pilot, have basically NO original characters, and are gonna be canceled after the first episode? It doesn't work. Not all of your ideas have to be spinoffs. Holy fucking shit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 Social Status A- 4 Stars Still a pumping show, and it somewhat reminds me of Learning to Cope. The scene with Ed is a classic, and I enjoyed it. This episode wasn't a good as other episodes, but still satisfied me. I also enjoyed how Morticia apologized to The Wilsons-it was nice to see them getting along now. This episode was EXTREMELY vivid-I could just picture Vinnie smoking a cigarette after Lola storms upstairs. Good work, Wumbo. Keep it up! Whoo! Wumbo's still got it! Any-hoo, I give your ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? pilot a B+. Pretty good start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ron Posted August 8, 2010 Share Posted August 8, 2010 Doubts/ Team Spongebob A- Good episode. It still had grammar errors, but the overall plot was wonderful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted August 8, 2010 Share Posted August 8, 2010 Past Lives-A I really liked the pilot. The episode left me eager to see more . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted August 8, 2010 Share Posted August 8, 2010 MermaidMan:The Bave and The Bold,The Final Showdown (Pt.2) Amazing episode.It had awesome action.Im really starting to like Mrs.Magic! Overall,I can't wait for Part 3 in this epic 5-part Saga!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted August 8, 2010 Share Posted August 8, 2010 MermaidMan:The Bave and The Bold,The Final Showdown (Pt.2) Amazing episode,it had awesome action.Im really starting to like Mrs.Magic! Overall,I can't wait for Part 3 in this epic 5-part Saga!!! I feel like wumbology. There's an edit button, you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted August 8, 2010 Share Posted August 8, 2010 I feel like wumbology. There's an edit button, you know. Yup,there is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted August 9, 2010 Share Posted August 9, 2010 Yup,there is. Words cannot describe how hard I lol'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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