TJ Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 But I already died!...or did I? >=] bwahaha...ahmm Your "death" Was unclear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jellatine Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 Exfuckingxactly. She could had written the damn note herself too. This is like Saw all over again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted July 6, 2011 Author Share Posted July 6, 2011 You guys know too much... I'm afraid I'm gonna have to kill you Unless you guys didn't read my earlier post. SpoilerIt's not Jelly! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jellatine Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 Unless you guys didn't read my earlier post. SpoilerIt's not Jelly! darn..I guess I'll never go on a killing spree in a multi-chaptered fictional story of members of a forum-based website concentrated on a yellow and porous sea creature, written by a 22 year old guy from Virginia that loves Mila Kunis =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted July 6, 2011 Author Share Posted July 6, 2011 darn..I guess I'll never go on a killing spree in a multi-chaptered fictional story of members of a forum-based website concentrated on a yellow and porous sea creature, written by a 22 year old guy from Virginia that loves Mila Kunis =/Hooray for breaking the fourth wall! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jellatine Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 Hooray for breaking the fourth wall! Well, I learned form the best ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deli Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 Awesome so far. And if I'm gonna die, I'd rather go out like Jelly; immersed in fandom. That, and The Muppet Show was originally filmed in Britain. *winkwinknudgenudge* I can't wait for the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted July 6, 2011 Author Share Posted July 6, 2011 Awesome so far. And if I'm gonna die, I'd rather go out like Jelly]http://r12.imgfast.net/users/1211/23/64/63/smiles/125508.gifThanks Deli for that information. SpoilerI might seriously consider that xD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deli Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 Thanks Deli for that information. SpoilerI might seriously consider that xD. As long as the killer writes ''IT'S TIME TO MEET THE MUPPETS'' in my blood. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Snake Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 Good job on this show so far, Clappy. I seriously have no idea who the killer is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted July 7, 2011 Author Share Posted July 7, 2011 Over 1000 views and we are only eight chapters in! This calls for a special chapter! Chapter 9 - A Good, Ole Fashion, Ironic Twist 70s woke up. Where the hell was he? The last thing he can remember was him and tvguy were having an argument about going to go see Abbey Road and then he faded to black. He was in a small dark room. Tvguy was no where to be found. 70s: Tvman? Where the fuck are you? I..... He fell face first to the ground. He then realized why. His foot was caught in a shackle. 70s tried his hardest to free himself but he had no luck. He was stuck. Suddenly, the tv screen right in front of him flickered on and on the screen was the Ripper. Ripper: Hello 70s and welcome to my new game show "This Is Not Saw"! In case you haven't realized by now, you are stuck. 70s *sarcasticaly*: NO WAI! Ripper: Yes way. And things are only going to get worse. The screen then zoomed out and right there was tvguy. He was chained up in a trash compactor at the dump. Ripper: Is this the repairman you were looking for? Speaking of tvs, guess who else we got on my new game show? The screen zoomed out again and Sara was trapped in a rusty old car waiting in line to get crushed in the junkyard. Sara was crying and screaming in the car with the words CALVIN coming off her lips. 70s: You fucking asshole! Ripper: Yes I am and guess what? It looks like you have a decision to make. You can only save one, while the other dies. Whose it going to be? Your wife or your best e-friend? Pick now....and don't pick the obvious one. 70s: No shit, I'm going to save my wife thank you very much! Ripper: Very well then, the junkyard is two blocks from this building and take a right. You have a hour to save her. I'll let you say your goodbyes to tvguy now. 70s couldn't help but choke up and start crying as he talked to tvguy through the television set. 70s: Tvman, I'm sorry. We may fight a lot, but you are important to me. I love you man and I don't want you to ever forget that. Tvguy: It's ok 70s, I would have made the same decision. I love you too. The camera zoomed out as the screen faded to black. A timer then appeared on the tv as it was counting down. 70s started to make a run for it, but fell to the ground again. He forgot that he was still chained up. He tried his hardest to locate the key, but failed. As he was starting to panic, he then saw a saw right next to him. 70s: Of course he wants me to do that. It is torture porn after all. 70s started to saw his leg off. He couldn't help but cringe as he was causing all this physical pain to himself. As the blood came gushing out as he kept sawing, he was finally able to free himself. Forty minutes were left on the clock. He hobbled his way to the door. It was locked from the outside. 70s saw the key as it was outside the door. He kept ramming the door over and over again. Thirty minutes were left. He then threw himself at the door with every last ounce of might and it broke open. 70s kept wobbling his way down the stairs as he was starting to run out of energy. Twenty minutes remained. He lost so much blood and used so much of his remaining energy to break down the door. He made his way two blocks after pushing himself over and over again to make it in time to save Sara. 70s finally arrived at the location with five minutes remaining. Something seemed off. He didn't see any cars at all in line to get crushed. He kept searching until he finally saw something that looked familiar. It was the trash compactor that tvguy was caught in. 70s: That fucking dick! He lied to me! Tvguy heard 70s voice. Tvguy: 70S! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING..... The trash compactor crushed tvguy. 70s ran out of time. He started breaking down because he realized that Sara was also out of time and probably dead. He wobbled his way back a few steps and took a left this time instead of a right. He arrived at the junkyard Sara died in. 70s kneeled himself in front of the junkyard and just lost it. He lost the best thing that ever happened to him. Footsteps came up from behind 70s as a trigger went off and 70s fell to the ground, laying there dead. The Ripper: Game over Calvin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
70s Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpongeOddFan Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 nice chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted July 7, 2011 Author Share Posted July 7, 2011 Yep, this is probably the gruesome/twisted chapter or episode of anything that I have ever written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CartoonCF Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 Wow, that was definately gruesome. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Snake Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 Holy crap, that was dark. Good work, Clappy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabre Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 Gory Gruesome Great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 when am I GONNA DIE!?!?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted July 8, 2011 Author Share Posted July 8, 2011 Sounded like the same scenario from The Dark Knight where Batman had to choose between Rachel and Harvey and ended up getting tricked to Harvey's location. I call Cable guy coming back with a half crushed body and reveals himself to be the killer named Two Face!I was actually aiming for Alfred Hitchcock in terms of twists, but The Dark Knight does indeed have the same scenario as well. Oh and if it hasn't been noted already, Sara is dead. I don't know if that was not made clear in the previous chapter, but 70s pointed out that it wasn't. So there. Chapter 10 - Where's Sabre? What is left of the SBC users took Jelly's dead body to the hospital as they investigated her dead body. Since the crew of the hit show CSI are able to do autopsys faster than they normally take, so does the this inspection crew. After talking it over with the SBC users, the group left the hospital and started to discuss Jelly's death. Clappy: Well it looks like someone must have hammered Jelly to death after much deliberation. OMJ: Hehe, hammered Jelly. Wumbo: Seriously Claps, isn't there anything else you can give OMJ to say besides sexual innuendos? Termi: Yes, lets all give Clappy a hard time for giving us dialogue that we usually say. Burn him at the stakes! >.> sbs1fan: So....are we? Everyone started to mindlessly ramble when all of a sudden a mysterious looking paperboy arrived on the scene. He told them that one of them paid him to spread the news. Inside the newspaper was a note. Dear SBC users, By the time you received this message, more of you have died. Elastic, tvguy, 70s, and Sara are all gone. Wait a moment....one more user is missing? Has anyone seen him? I'll give you a hint. Look at his spin-offs. Maybe you can save him before its too late. Love, The Killer And once more OMJ pulled out his iPhone and read the users the stories of Sabre. It took a couple hours since Sabre is very detailed about his spin-offs, but he finished them. 4EG: Teenj: I don't think I heard any clues to where the killer possibly hid Sabre. SBiscool: Maybe its title? Drag: DERP! Ex: Hold that derp! SBiscool might be on to something. Goosey: What exactly is that? Are we going to search the entire ocean and dig underground until we reach the Earth's core? SOF: Silly Goosey. Jjs: No, but maybe we should search the English channel since its underwater and maybe the subways since they are underground. Sabre shouldn't have been killed off that far. The group of users then split into two as they went to locate Sabre. Underwater hilaryfan80 Clappy Steel Jjs OMJ Dragiiin Wumbo SOF Goosebumpsfan Deli CF Underground Face 4EverGreen PhilipB Sbs1fan CDCB terminoob teenj Pakasa Metal Snake SBiscool ExKizuna The groups then split up as they went their separate ways in hopes of finding Sabre. The underwater group went to search the English Channel while the underground group went to the closest subway. The underwater group rented out a cheap boat as they started to scan the clear waters of the English Channel in hopes of finding Sabre. After hours of investigating, they were just about ready to give up hope, until....... SOF: Guys, what that? A body was tied to a weight under the water in the shallowest end (10 feet). OMJ dove into the water and untied Sabre. After giving him rounds of CPR, there was no response. Sabre was dead. While mourning his lost, CF discovered a note attached to Sabre. She grabbed the note. It was obvious you guys were going to split into two groups. I feel sorry for those of you who are investigating the subways right about now since the train schedule states that a train is stopping at any minute now. Love, The Killer *Meanwhile* Ex: Dammit Face! How much longer are we going to walk along these tracks for. Face: Well we need to find Sabre before he meets his untimely doom. Just then, they spotted a body with a bag on its head laying on the train tracks, all tied up. They assumed it was Sabre's as everyone ran onto the tracks and untied him. Suddenly they realized that it wasn't Sabre. It was the dead body of Elastic. Suddenly, a subway train was honking its horn as it was coming straight towards them. Ex, teenj, Luke, terminoob, and Face barely made it out alive as the train hit everyone else on impact. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Sponge Posted July 8, 2011 Share Posted July 8, 2011 I am indestructably lucky, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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