Karen Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 Patrick ate a cookie The end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 Patrick ate a cookie The end. To stick with the SpongeBob theme of this "lit" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 You're mixing past and present tense. The English teacher in me gives this fanfic a "get learned". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Snake Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 Patrick ate a cookie The end. I've never felt such a strange combination of disappointment and confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel Sponge Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 What did this filler had to do with anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragiiin123 Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 DAMN IT YOU GUYS IF THIS WAS POSTED ON SBM IT WOULDVE GOTTEN HILARIOUS COMMENTS LOLOLO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karen Posted February 19, 2011 Author Share Posted February 19, 2011 It WAS posted on SBM. I figured SBC needed this epic tale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 I've never felt such a strange combination of disappointment and confusion. 2 sentence stories can do that to a guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elastic Dawg Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 It was quite amusing, but around the middle became monotonous and uninspired. The ending really picked up though, and the cliffhanger ending keeps me waiting for the next installment. Very well done. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 It was quite amusing, but around the middle became monotonous and uninspired. The ending really picked up though, and the cliffhanger ending keeps me waiting for the next installment. Very well done.But it said The End, so unless Patrick Makes A Sequel, there will be no next installment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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