TJ Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 Not really. I actually decide to not do this. I have come to realize that the sequel is the perfect way to end this. I mean this whole series was meant to be a murder mystery breaking the fourth wall. I don't know if I can mock that anymore than I already did. Thus, no more ATTWL. However, I have a new lit in mind. I will make the thread for that at some point. NOOOOOO . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amphibia Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 aw man, i was looking forward to reading this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Crow Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 I await this new lit you speak of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Snake Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 Awww. If that's your decision though, that's fine. Sucks that ATTWL won't be a trilogy after all, but looking back on it, the second one did have a pretty satisfying ending to the series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted February 11, 2012 Author Share Posted February 11, 2012 The rights to this edition of ATTWL now belong to SOF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Crow Posted February 11, 2012 Share Posted February 11, 2012 I am just pretty freaking excited for this now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amphibia Posted February 11, 2012 Share Posted February 11, 2012 why thank you. Clappy ATTWL is now under new management. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 why thank you. Clappy ATTWL is now under new management. .......................you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Crow Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 .......................you? Yes, as Clappy stated previously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted February 14, 2012 Share Posted February 14, 2012 Yes, as Clappy stated previously. I honestly didn't bother to read the posts above his at that moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 This still coming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amphibia Posted May 22, 2012 Share Posted May 22, 2012 The moment you been waiting for, i present to you ATTWL 3: The Final Chapter Chapter 1: The Arrival of the Party Our story opens to the beautiful scene of the city Las Vegas, and we see a bus arriving in front of a hotel. Fifteen SBCers have arrived in front of a hotel in Las Vegas, getting off a bus. We see Clappy standing in front of a hotel. SpongeOddFan: Uh Clappy, can you explain to us again why we are here in Las Vegas? Clappy: Because SOF, I had invited active users from SBC to come with me to celebrate my party in this hotel They had entered in the main lobby looking around the house. Ex: Is this the right place? 70s: Well, Claps said it is right place. Servin' Up Smiles: Oh my gosh, this place is awesome! Jjsthekid: So where can we sit? Clappy: We'll get to that when we go into the dining room. Unlimitedcat: Sweet, wait 'till I write a juicy story about this in SBC News! Jelly: Hey, is that PhilipB? SOF: What’s he doing there? I thought we were enemies. Clappy: Oh, I forgot to tell you guys that I also invited some SBMers to come for the party. Steel Sponge: Eh, fine with me. They walked to where Phillp was along with fourteen other SBMers. teenj: So there is thirty guests whole, or thirty one if you count yourself? Quite a party. Clappy: Yeah, nothing wrong with more people. Tvguy: Hello SBMers. PhillipB: Hello SBCers. JCM: Oh hi. Dragiiin: Hello me PhillpB: What brings you here? CDCB: Clappy invited us to come to the party to celebrate his honors. Mothra: Sounds very exciting. Elastic: Ah, I remember when I was member of SBM, good times. Ex: When can we start the damn party? The SBCers and SBMers headed into the dining room. Users/Suspects: (each time someone is killed, their name will be crossed off below in each episode to make things easier) SBC SOF Clappy 70s tvguy Jjsthekid Steel Sponge CDCB hilaryfan80 terminoob Jelly teenj SpongeSebastian Wumbo Unlimitedcat Servin’ Up Smiles Ex SBM Mothra PhilipB JCM (aka Nosferatu) Jibbix Ssj Spongedude Abney Hasfarr DadMom AngryPants Tvlover RedSoxFan Stinkoman Spongey34 Bugs Bunny DirtyDan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 ATTWL 3 - C My main problems are length and characters. After 4 months, this short thing is all you've produced? The Characters have little personality. I am mostly just happy to have ATTWL back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Crow Posted May 23, 2012 Share Posted May 23, 2012 I was kinda looking forward to this, but this initial chapter fell short, figuratively and literally. I agree with Teenj about the length and lack of any character development. It all seemed like a bunch of one-dimensional banter. The first chapter of any story should set the overall tone, I honestly feel let down by the lack of that. This doesn't mean I'll stop reading this, I'll continue reading to see if things pickup. And on a lighthearted/non-serious note, I am appalled at being snubbed by Clappy 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amphibia Posted June 13, 2012 Share Posted June 13, 2012 Chapter 2: Honor of Speech We last left off in the previous chapter where the SBCers and SBMers were headed into the dining room. Everyone got a seat at different tables. Smiles: Sweet, we get to see what Clappy says! I am so excited! 70s: I’m sure he’ll give some shout out to us. Jjsthekid: I hope so. hilaryfan80: I’ll say, things are doing well though. Clappy: It’ll be great, I'm getting prepared for my speech. Clappy left to prepare for his speech, and we see a waiter approach several tables. Waiter: Good day, gentlemen, what can I do for you? 70s: Yes, we want uh…pizza. Wumbo: Me too. SOF: Same here. Teenj: Yeah, I’m starving! Waiter: Very well then. The Waiter then went into the kitchen to prepare everyone's meals. Clappy was on the stage and began his speech. Tvguy: We're ready! Clappy began to start his speech where he thanked SBC and said such things about how he was proud to be a staff member. He was also proud of his success in the first two ATTWL's. Once his speech was over, everyone clapped and cheered for him. PhillpB: Nice work, if only I was more active there.. SOF: I like it! The Waiter then came with the food they asked for. Teenj: This is delicious! Ex: That was an awesome speech, Claps. Stay gold bro. Clappy: Thanks guys, I’m glad you liked it. I was very nervous at first. UC: I have to go get something, brb. Termi: Hm..that's odd. SOF: What? Termi: Don't we know what may happen next? JCM: I dunno, but I bet it isn't good. Smiles: No, why? Termi: Well, when we are all together in a place like this...remember the previous two ATTWL's? Am I the only one with some common sense here? Clappy: You mean that well...this will end up like the previous two.. 70s: I think it will. Remember we were at a mansion for the first time.. Steel Sponge: ...and at the UK for the second time. Termi: Yep, I think we are being watched. Mothra: What in God's name are you guys talking about? Steel: Well Mothra, it's basically about two of Clappy's old lits. Someone disturbed the location the SBCers were staying at, and killed everyone one by one. Basically, termi is saying this may happen again. Seb was the killer for the first story. Of course, I was slightly flattered and confused about being the killer in the second story. SpongeSebastian: Well, I can tell you I doubt me or Steel would be the killer again. DadMomAngryPants: You mean...we may be killed? Jjs: Well, for instance, UC said she’ll get something and you-know-who is going to do you-know-what to her. Let's hope she is okay. Termi: Exactly, we better keep an eye out for anything suspicious. Just then, UC returned, standing frozen. Wumbo: Oh welcome back, UC. UC didn’t say anything and she fell to ground. Her hand began to bleed, and so did her chest. Wumbo: Is she okay? SOF: Well, ask hilaryfan80, he is a doctor after all. hilaryfan80 checked her pulse. hilaryfan80: She's dead. Clappy: Oh shit.. SOF: NOOOOOOOOOOOO! Steel: Well, here we go again... Users/Suspects: SBC SOF Clappy 70s tvguy Jjsthekid Steel Sponge CDCB hilaryfan80 terminoob Jelly teenj SpongeSebastian Wumbo Servin’ Up Smiles Ex SBM Mothra PhilipB JCM (aka Nosferatu) Jibbix Ssj Spongedude Abney Hasfarr DadMom AngryPants Tvlover RedSoxFan Stinkoman Spongey34 Bugs Bunny DirtyDan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted June 13, 2012 Share Posted June 13, 2012 Well, I can say that this was definentely longer, which is good. I liked Termi referencing that these things happened the same way in the original two ATTWL's. I ddin't like UC's death. It was kinda unclear..and you described it weird. I really couldn't get a clear visualization of it. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Snake Posted June 23, 2012 Share Posted June 23, 2012 What teenj said pretty much. A big improvement over the first episode, though you could've added a much better description on how UC died. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Webizoid Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 Sorry to bump, but could I make a small cameo? Yu don't have to, but it would be nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amphibia Posted September 1, 2012 Share Posted September 1, 2012 after the long wait, here's chapter 3. Chapter 3: The Madness Continues We pick off where the previous chapter ended, with UC dying. Jjs: Who killed UC? Tvguy: I’m guessing one of the SBMers killed her. Abney: What? We didn’t kill her, and you shouldn't suspect us like that! Termi: He’s right, tvguy, let's not jump to conclusions. SOF: Right...now what do we do?! Clappy: Let's investigate to see what caused her death. Everyone headed to the lobby room to investigate. Jjs: Hm...I don't see anything suspicious. Steel Sponge: Nope, nothing here. Teenj: Hey guys, look at this.. *points to gun on the floor* Termi: What the hell…? Phil: Who left a gun on the floor? Jjs: I don’t know, maybe the killer dropped it. hilaryfan80: Hold a second...what's that? Everyone then saw UC's SBC News microphone laying on the ground. Steel: What the heck? Why did she drop it? Termi: I think I know, UC went to get something, and then when she came back, she was apparently killed. The killer must have shot her in the hand because they feared she was going to hit them with the mic, and then shot her in the chest to finish her off. Clappy: Well, I looked at a security camera, and there was a recording at the time of UC's murder...but apparently the footage is missing...strange. SOF: So who could be the killer? Clappy: I don’t know, I guess one of us has to be the killer. Tvguy: Anyone could be the killer.. *looks around the room* Termi: Yeah, we better be careful. Don’t just leave anyone behind. We should split up to look for more clues in each group. CD: Good idea. Jelly: I like the idea, termi. Abney: We could split up, SBM go that way and SBCers go that way. Termi: You do have a point there. Let’s split up, guys. Everyone has split into two groups as we see SBM’s group in the next scene. Mothra: Damn it, what are we looking for? Ssj: Clues, what do you expect? Mothra: It would be stupid if we found nothing in our searches. JCM: Not really, we just keep walking and I’m sure we'll find something. DMAP: Look at this... *picks up something* Someone dropped this. *shows a note to them* It appears someone is hunting us down. Bugs Bunny: What do you mean? DMAP: It only says the word "Revenge".. Ssj: What the? Let me see that.. *grabs the paper* Why would the killer want revenge? We don't have any enemies...do we? DirtyDan: Not really, except for SBC, but we ended the war. Spongedude: Yeah, I don't think it was them either, but I believe someone would want revenge for whatever reasons. Stinkoman: I guess so. Just then, someone kidnapped hasfarr, and we heard him cry for help. Hasfarr: HELP! Mothra: FUCK, the killer is here! DMAP: After him! The SBMers chased after a shadow and ended up in the dining room. RedSoxFan: Where’d he go? Ssj looked around and saw something. Ssj: Uh guys, you better take a look at this. SBMers gathered around as they saw hasfarr laying dead on the floor in a pool of blood. JCM: Is he dead? Jibbix: Let me check. *checks his pulse* Yeah, he’s dead. Abney: Shit...and now the rest of us are pray in the killer's hands.. Users/Suspects: SBC SOF Clappy 70s tvguy Jjsthekid Steel Sponge CDCB hilaryfan80 terminoob Jelly teenj SpongeSebastian Wumbo Servin’ Up Smiles Ex SBM Mothra PhilipB JCM (aka Nosferatu) Jibbix Ssj Spongedude Abney DadMom AngryPants Tvlover RedSoxFan Stinkoman Spongey34 Bugs Bunny DirtyDan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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