Karen Posted March 24, 2011 Share Posted March 24, 2011 This is just a short Spongebob fanfic I wrote myself. I hope they're not OOC, (since this is a first attempt), but I still hope you enjoy reading this. One bright morning in Bikini Bottom, Squidward rolled out of his house riding on a bike. He had a safety helmet on so his head wouldnÔÇÖt get injured if he fell off. ÔÇ£AhhhhÔǪ nothing beats like a wonderful morning riding on a bike. I think IÔÇÖll take a stroll pass through the park,ÔÇØ Squidward suggested to himself. He started to paddle pass by SpongebobÔÇÖs house. Spongebob opened his front door and notices Squidward, but he didnÔÇÖt pay any attention to him. ÔÇ£Hi Squidward!ÔÇØ Spongebob called out. Squidward screeched to a stop and groaned. ÔÇ£ÔǪAnd this day just got worseÔǪÔÇØ he muttered, not amused. Spongebob skitted over to him. The yellow sponge had his uniform hat on for work. ÔÇ£Hey, pal!ÔÇØ Squidward gritted through his teeth. ÔÇ£SpongebobÔǪ I am NOT your ÔÇÿpalÔÇÖ! What do you want? CanÔÇÖt you see IÔÇÖm trying to enjoy my day off from work today?ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Day off? You never have-ÔÇØ Squidward quickly covered his mouth. ÔÇ£Shut up, you drillbit! IÔÇÖm calling in sick!ÔÇØ Spongebob seems confused. ÔÇ£But Squidward, you donÔÇÖt look sickÔǪ or sound like youÔÇÖre sick,ÔÇØ he observed. ÔÇ£Are you lying?ÔÇØ he asked with a sneaky grin. ÔÇ£No IÔÇÖm not,ÔÇØ the squid answered. ÔÇ£But it looks so obvious-ÔÇØ ÔÇ£Okay, okay! Fine, you caught me. IÔÇÖm not sick. But you have GOT to promise not to tell Mr. Krabs. If he sees that I donÔÇÖt come to work today, heÔÇÖs gonna freak.ÔÇØ Spongebob thought for a moment. "Hmmm... for the record, why would you want to miss work today?" Squidward sighed. "For my entire life, I have worked in a greasy restaurant. I can't take the smells, the sight of the customers enjoying that heart-attack on a bun you call 'food', and the point that Plankton comes in there trying to steal that stupid Krabby Patty formula EVERY SINGLE DAY. It's just disgusting... He keeps interrupting my naps and etcetera! I just need some 'me' time! Spending time alone... with myself!" Spongebob looked at him. "All right, well. You look like you're telling the truth. I suppose I could let it slide..." Squidward grinned. "Thank you so much, Spongebob! If you ever tell Mr. Krabs about this, you'll SO regret it." he said with a serious face. He paddled away, leaving Spongebob standing there. "Eh, he's gonna get caught anyway." Spongebob said in a bored tone. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wumbo Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 Not bad, not bad. Some spurts of OOC-ness (never known SpongeBob to sneer before), but overall good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clappy Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 Not too bad, but like Wumbo stated there were a couple moments that were pretty out of character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karen Posted March 25, 2011 Author Share Posted March 25, 2011 Thank you so much, guys. I appreciate the comments. I'll make some changes (as to what Wumbology referred to) to make Spongebob more in-character. Also, reviews appreciated, but they won't be necessary. :3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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