mightymaxvspollypocket Posted October 8, 2015 Share Posted October 8, 2015 I sit on the couch and write some juicy horror stories, I love horror. Nothing beats it i could watch Friday the 13th any day even on Christmas! I write about a mutant puppy who kills anyone who looks at him. Then i hear the door bell, so i get up and drop my notebook of terror. The mailman gave me my new bag of horror collectibles I love these charming toys! I shut the door and turn and i see a creepy bird at my window black, green eyes, and drooling, like the dragon breath birdy horror story i wrote basically it was about a bird crossed with a dragon and could grow huge at anytime, I laugh at the thought it was probably a prank so i close the blinds and finish writing my mutant dog story. I then go to sleep and enjoyed my nightly sleep. I wake up and go the kitchen and see some weird cheese probably been there for years and i haven't noticed i threw it away, but went to throw away a piece of paper to know it was gone, I turn to see the fridge slam shut. Even though i love a good scare i don't enjoy actual deadly situation I put some of my important things in a bag and drive to the furthest motel. I decided i should do some research so I grab my computer and look up "disappear cheese ghost" nothing. I felt like an idiot, but then i heard it scratching i open the door a crack and there was a dog whimpering. I shoo'd him but he growled so i decided to call a dog catcher. I call him and as soon as i check outside the dogs gone... then he bites my arm. How in the world did it get here?! I throw it across the room it lands on the floor and soon the mirror shows in image of me falling down on the highest cliff. I knew it. My notebook stories came to life... my sink spewed out purple water, my fridge fell over, and the dog growled. I was cornered as i notice the window was open i jumped out luckily with my car keys but it wasn't fine there was a cliff and i fell soon to be down in hell with Satan. END Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mightymaxvspollypocket Posted October 8, 2015 Author Share Posted October 8, 2015 I made this for Halloween guys so tell me if you liked also i know there are grammer mistakes and misspells but please ignore them and read the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDCB Posted October 8, 2015 Share Posted October 8, 2015 Word of Advice: Don't stop the story before it begins. Unless you're trying to set up for a sequel, "falling down in Hell with Satan" is not how I'd end a story. At least not unless there was some sort of backstory to foreshadow the event. A nice and certainly creative try, but a non-sequitor ending like that belongs in The Three Stooges. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mightymaxvspollypocket Posted October 9, 2015 Author Share Posted October 9, 2015 Word of Advice: Don't stop the story before it begins. Unless you're trying to set up for a sequel, "falling down in Hell with Satan" is not how I'd end a story. At least not unless there was some sort of backstory to foreshadow the event. A nice and certainly creative try, but a non-sequitor ending like that belongs in The Three Stooges.Well thanks then i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MMM Posted October 9, 2015 Share Posted October 9, 2015 I thought this was an art thread at first oops It's good, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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