crushingmayhem Posted August 3, 2013 Share Posted August 3, 2013 In a near future, humanity is facing their biggest crisis yet. As the worst case scenario approached, a group of guerrilla soldiers prepared to engaged in an open battle that will determine the fate of the world... Characters: Bob - Commander Harry - Vice-Commander Julio - Tactical weapons specialist Mary - Major Nelson - Soldier Rated Mature: For strong language and violence. Genre: Drama, Action/Adventure, Comedy. -------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1: Prepare for battle! Harry: What a rough day, will the enemy strike before dawn? 'Cause I'm getting really tired. Bob: I doubt those are their main objectives. Plus, we need to draw a plan that will allow us to defend ourselves from their weapons. Soldier: Sir! Please come with us to the command room, there's something we'd like to show you. Bob: Alright then, show me what's up. *goes to command room* Crew: Hey commander! What's cookin'? Bob: This is no time to be bitching around, get back to your posts immediately! Crew: Yes sir! Bob: Ok, so what were you gonna show me? Soldier: This sir! *shows him the prints* Bob: What?! I can't believe this... They now have a homing missile directed right at us. Harry: Sir! We are engaging earlier than expected. Shall I call the rest of the group to assemble. Bob: You have orders to do so, go ahead. Harry: Thank you! Bob: That'll keep him busy for a while. In the meantime, I have to prepare for my speech...I just hope I don't screw up this time cause the last time was a lame ass fuck of a speech. *group arrives* Mary: Hello commander! I thought we were having dinner tonight but unfortunately this had to happen. Bob: Yeah, yeah. We'll have dinner together later on. Mary: Aw, don't be silly, you know you want to have a night together with me. Bob: *blushes* A..about that... (thinks that it'll all be over soon) Crew: Commander! Bob: Welcome men! Let us discuss our preparations for the upcoming battle. Nelson: Btw, where's Julio? Bob: I don't know, someone told me that he was coming but I'm beginning to doubt that. Nelson: Yeah. I'm afraid so. Mary: He must be on his way, let's not pressure him too much. Bob: Right. Harry: Tonight's gonna be an important night. Because tomorrow we'll beat those jerks! Fuck yeah! Bob: Uh, don't get too carried away... END 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moar Boy Posted August 3, 2013 Share Posted August 3, 2013 Need more dakka. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClassicNickelodeon Fan 1 Posted August 3, 2013 Share Posted August 3, 2013 I can see how you took some elements from anime. Good job Crush! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crushingmayhem Posted August 3, 2013 Author Share Posted August 3, 2013 Chapter 2: Dawn of War Soldier: We have finished our preparations for today's battle; we're awaiting orders commander! Bob: Yeah. Head for the northern gates, our operations should begin there. Crew: Sir yes sir! Julio: Sir! Am I going to be assigned as the leader of this operation? Bob: Why yes! You're an important asset for our team. How could I forget about you? By the way, where were you yesterday, we thought that you had died or something. Julio: Well... I was resisting a group of mercenaries that surrounded me. And thus, I wasn't able to get here in time. Bob: Ah i see. Julio: I taught those son of a bitches a major lesson. At this point they should be scared shitless of me. Bob: Hahaha, well at least you're alive and well. Julio: Pretty much. Bob: Well then, let us commence our preparations! Crew: Sir yes sir! Mary: Commander, we just got a message from our allies. They said that the enemy knows our very move. Bob: Tell them that they should take care of the homing missile that's being pointed right at us. And we'll deal with the invading forces. Mary: You got it commander! *laughs* (Meanwhile, the battle starts and some soldiers are reported dead) Soldier: Go Go Go!!!!!! Enemy soldiers: Fuck!!! Ahh!!!! Soldier: Should I give that guy a headshot? Soldier: Sure, go ahead. This is a battle for the future of this world, anything must be done to ensure that. Nelson: Hold on you two, don't go firing randomly at enemies. What if you get killed yourselves?! Soldier: Ah, sorry. I just wanted to get a killstreak. Nelson: Lol, killstreak. This isn't a FPS game, this is real life dammit! Soldier: Ok...gotcha... *fires AK-47* Enemy soldier: Ugh... *falls dead* Enemy soldiers fire back at the crew members, this time leaving two dead. Soldier: Gaaaah.... *screaming in pain* Nelson: No!! Hold on, I'll call a medic, they should arrive quicker than usual. Soldier: Please...don't give up... Nelson: Fuck it! You need to survive, what would we do without you? Wait, I'll call deputy commander Harry. He should know what to do. Soldier: There's...no...time... I had... a...good...life... Nelson: Save your strength, Harry's coming. Soldier: Tell my wife...I...loved...her... *falls dead* Nelson: Nooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Harry: Is everything alright in there? Nelson: This guy, just died on me. I will never forget those who do harm on others! Harry: Let me take him back; and please Nelson, don't get yourself killed. Nelson: Don't worry, I won't. (In the medic tent) Bob: Wow, I can't believe we've had so many casualties so far. The enemy seems stronger than we thought. Harry: Yeah, this soldier died fighting in the northern gates alongside Nelson. Bob: Tell Nelson to be careful, I hope he doesn't get careless about this. This is no joke. But Julio said he was gonna bring reinforcements, so we'll probably gain the upper hand again. Mary: Death is a terrible thing. I lost my family due to war, and I've never recovered from such tragedy. *tears fall* Bob: Don't worry about it Mary, I'm sure we'll thing of something. Mary: Thank you so much Bob. I just got a flashback, and it made me sad just to think about it. Bob: It's alright. (Back in the frontlines) *soldiers clashing with one another* Soldier: Gaah!!!! *dies* Enemy Soldier: Will these bastards ever learn how to battle? *fires rifle* Soldier: Oh no you don't *fires back* *both fall to the ground injures* Enemy Soldier: Mwahahaha! END Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crushingmayhem Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 Chapter 3: The Great Battle Bob: Quick! Let's get everyone to safety. Mary: Right. Soldier: Sir! The missile is about to be launched right at us! Bob: No kidding? Tell those soldiers to get the fuck out of there! I want them out now! Soldier: Ok sir, will do. *meanwhile in the northern gates* Nelson: Take cover!! Enemy soldiers: *prepare the rocket* Soldier: Attack! Attack! Attack! *they open fire* Soldier: What are we gonna do now? They have the upper hand? Nelson: Quit your yapping man! We can win this, I know we can. Soldier: But what if the missile launch is successful? Nelson: Then we'll kill those bastards. It wouldn't be that hard to do as long as we practice. Soldier: Alright. But enough talking. I got to kill this guy that's firing at us. *takes cover and shoots rifle* Enemy Soldier: Fuck you! *throws grenade* Soldier: Oh shit! Everyone! Take Cover! *they take cover* Soldier: Haha! you missed! Enemy soldier: *frustrated* I'll kill you mother fucker!!!!!!! *fires all the bullets of his machine gun* Soldier: *hidden in a bunker fires sniper rifle* Enemy soldier: *gets shot* Gaah!!!! Soldier: What was that?! Nelson: *calling commander Bob* We have managed to secure the northern gates. But we're not done yet because there are still some enemies to take care of. Bob: Good to know. Inform vice commander Harry when you have the time. Nelson: Will do boss! *back in the headquarters* Julio: I hope nothing bad happens. I'm worried that i'll end up dying in this conflict. Soldier: Well, we're all in risk of dying actually. But don't worry about it; after all, you're our tactical weapons specialist so you're supposed to help us win no matter what. Julio: You're right. Maybe after this conflict is over I'll be able to see my wife and kids. Mary: Well, aren't you being a little downer than usual. Julio: Well, that's debatable but yeah, I'm worried. Mary: To tell you the truth I'm a little worried about that missile too. I just hope we get to see this world get liberated from this mess. Julio : I guess you're right. At the end of the day, it's up to us to decide the fate of this world. No one else should decide for us. END Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moar Boy Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 You need to explain the background, like where are they or what is their reason to fight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crushingmayhem Posted August 7, 2013 Author Share Posted August 7, 2013 You need to explain the background, like where are they or what is their reason to fight. Slowdown, that's not the point of this lit. This is more of a story of survival, not a story with a main villain or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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