I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 Gonna make a spinoff called Spongebob SuperSponge The first episode have aliens in it More to Come Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Gonna post episode 1 page 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 SpongeBob SuperSponge! Episode 1 invasion of the Aliens The scene opens up with SpongeBob doing things with Patrick like playing twister outside of their houses while making noises it wakes up Squidward and he opens up the right window and said “SpongeBob Stop waking me up in my beauty sleeps you do this all the time!!!”SpongeBob replied to Squidward ”Okay” Squidward went to sleep again the noises started again instead of open the right window of his house he went outside Squidward said ”that’s not I meant you barnacle head!” After Squidward talked the UFO came (unidentified Flying Object) SpongeBob and Patrick said” What the barnacle is this” The aliens came out and killed Squidward with their laser beams SpongeBob and Patrick said “They killed Squidward Run!!!!!” SpongeBob and Patrick ran to sandy’s treedom they open the door and said” LET US IN LET US IN!!!!!” Sandy replied” Okay SpongeBob is this one kind of a joke and… OH NO” The aliens came to sandy treedom and destroyed sandy’s door and they pointed the gun at sandy To be continued Will the aliens kill sandy or SpongeBob and Patrick Will it Cause Chaos on binki bottom Will sandy kill the aliens and SpongeBob become SuperSponge! Find out in Page 2 of SpongeBob SuperSponge Page 1 Rated PG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
box Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 I think you should improve your grammar a bit, (no offense), and maybe the story telling could have a bit of the change but the idea has...potential. I await the next page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 Reminds me of when I first started Team SpongeBob. But like me, eventually your storytelling and grammar is gonna improve. This a very good idea for a spin-off. Just work on it more . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 I think you should improve your grammar a bit, (no offense), and maybe the story telling could have a bit of the change but the idea has...potential. I await the next page. Yeah i am a bit not good at grammer but i try my best and my story telling may change a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Reminds me of when I first started Team SpongeBob. But like me, eventually your storytelling and grammar is gonna improve. This a very good idea for a spin-off. Just work on it more . I can make 2 pages a day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 I write this in microsoft word 2007 by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
box Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 Ah, well then, I await the next page. I write with Notepad and SBC's default text system. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJ Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 ^Hey, me too . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 SpongeBob SuperSponge! Episode 1 Invasion of the aliens Last page SpongeBob and Patrick interrupt Squidward’s Beauty sleep and Squidward get blasted by the aliens they enter Sandy’s Tree Dom but then they get trapped by the aliens what will happen find out in page 2 of this spinoff “Uh Sandy what would we do! The aliens are going to blast us” Sandy said” Use your karate skills” Sandy knocked out the 2nd alien and SpongeBob knocked out 1st Alien. They picked up the laser beams “WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO!”Said SpongeBob Sandy said” I know there are more than One UFO. After that Happened they heard laser beams SpongeBob Said “Oh No its going by the Krusty Krab!”SpongeBob Went to the Krusty Krab to Save them Mr Krab Said” Oh my boy you’re late for today” SpongeBob said” Watch out” The Aliens Came in the Krusty Krab and the customers Got blasted by the aliens Mr Krab Said” Stop killing my Customers!” Mr Krabs throws the table and killed 2 of the aliens only to discover there were more than 2 He Throws another table at the aliens Mr Krabs said” That’s what get for killing my Customers and SpongeBob said” WATCH OUT MR KRABS!”The Robot with the alien throws the table Mr Krabs dodges it and throws the table at it he discover That the robot only get destroyed when SpongeBob uses his laser beam Mr krabs grab the laser beam out of SpongeBob’s hands and fires it at the robot making it 6 shots to destroy it And Mr Krabs Said” They will Pay” They heard the TV and went to watch The Fish on the TV Said “The Green headed guys are destroying the city with their laser Beams and the Police were no match for the aliens what will we Do” Mr Krabs Says Oh No Will SpongeBob Destory all the aliens What happened to Squidward Why there are aliens What is the aliens plot? Find out in Page 3 of SpongeBob Super Sponge Page 2 Rated PG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Next Page Posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Ah, well then, I await the next page. I write with Notepad and SBC's default text system. Next page is posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Rating for this is rated PG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
box Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 Intriguing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'M A TRASH CAN Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Ok thats all for now 2 more pages next day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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