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    The Krusty Krab: The Years Before Spongebob

    in Davy Jones' Locker

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    Episode 13: Attempted

    Plankton gazed out the window. The Krusty Krab. That was his competition. How could a restaurant so stupidly named be so popular? He didnÔÇÖt understand it. PlanktonÔÇÖs Chum was the best thing any person had ever tasted. But he had unfound talent. Soon Krabs would pay. Soon enough.

    Plankton paced around. ÔÇ£IÔÇÖll steal it! IÔÇÖll steal the Krabby Patty Formula!ÔÇØ Plankton was rather happy with the idea and went to sleep happy. The next day, the formula would be in his hands.

    ÔÇ£Order up!ÔÇØ Jim yelled. He passed the Krabby Patty to Squidward who passed it to Mr. Jenkins who was a younger 60 year old man.

    ÔÇ£Thank you, sonny,ÔÇØ he said and found a table to sit down.

    ÔÇ£Tim, thereÔÇÖs a toilet back-up in the bathrooms. Fix it before Mr. Krabs finds out,ÔÇØ Marly said.

    ÔÇ£You got it, Marly!ÔÇØ Tim said and rushed towards the bathroom.

    The Krusty Krab was flooded with customers. If anything went wrong, they would get blamed. They had to keep everything flowing smoothly. Meanwhile, at the Chum Bucket, Plankton stood by a window with binoculars. He had carefully planned his theft and ÔÇ£accidentÔÇØ at the Krusty Krab. Soon he was sneak out and the games would begin.

    ÔÇ£Marmaduke! Marmaduke! HereÔÇÖs your Krabby Patty!ÔÇØ Squidward said, yelling across the room to Marmaduke who wasnÔÇÖt looking at Squidward. Squidward then slapped his forehead and started walking over to Marmaduke. Suddenly a loud SHATTER rippled through the air.

    ÔÇ£What the sea barnacle?ÔÇØ Squidward said looking behind him.

    Plankton stood over the Krabby Patty Formula which was hidden under a floor board. He had shattered a window to get in and had pried the floor board off. He reached down and grabbed the formula.

    ÔÇ£Ha, ha, ha! Victorious!ÔÇØ Plankton screeched. Suddenly Mr. Krabs burst in.

    ÔÇ£PLANKTON!ÔÇØ Mr. Krabs screamed.

    ÔÇ£Get outta her Krabs!ÔÇØ Plankton yelled. He turned around and started to run.

    ÔÇ£I got him!ÔÇØ Jim yelled and started to sprint after him. Suddenly an explosion exploded in front of them. Jim and Plankton flew up into the air as a gigantic boatmobile came out of the ground.

    This was the very first attempt of stealing the formula. Plankton came so close but sadly lost it.

    The Krusty Krab: The Years Before Spongebob

    in Davy Jones' Locker

    Posted

    Episode 12#: Rivalry

    The day was cold and rainy in Bikini Bottom. Jim was behind the stove flipping patties. Squidward was behind the register reading Fabulous Squid. Ms. Flounders sat at a table, biting into her delicious Deluxe Krabby Patty. Suddenly, a frightened fish ran in. He was drenched from the rain and terror was sketched into his face.

    Ç£WhatÔÇÖs wrong?ÔÇØ Marmaduke asked.

    ÔÇ£ItÔÇÖs horrible, I swear!ÔÇØ the fish muttered.

    ÔÇ£What? What happened?ÔÇØ said Marly.

    ÔÇ£ItÔÇÖs a big, huge, restaurant. Just zooming down the street, being held by a crane. It wouldnÔÇÖt stop,ÔÇØ the man muttered.

    Suddenly the ground started to rumble. A giant, black, shadow loomed in the distance. It came closer and soon a restaurant was being set down. The letters The Chum Bucket graced the face of the building. Mr. Krabs raced out of his office after the rumbling stopped and peered out at the new restaurant.

    ÔÇ£NO!ÔÇØ he shouted. Mr. Krabs didnÔÇÖt like the idea of competition. He walked out and knocked on the doors of The Chum Bucket. A small green animal replied to the door. He wore a white suit and had glasses on.

    ÔÇ£Hello, my dear customer. Welcome to the Chum Bucket. Please come in,ÔÇØ the rather small green animal said.

    ÔÇ£I am the owner of the Krusty Krab. Get out! We was here first,ÔÇØ Mr. Krabs snarled.

    ÔÇ£IÔÇÖm sorry,ÔÇØ the thing said. ÔÇ£I am Plankton. And I donÔÇÖt do well with unfriendly neighbors.ÔÇØ He yanked off his suit and glasses and glared up and Mr. Krabs.

    ÔÇ£Well I own the Krabby Patty so I will put ye out of business!ÔÇØ Mr. Krabs started to walk away then stopped.

    ÔÇ£Wait,ÔÇØ he said. ÔÇ£Your name is Plankton?ÔÇØ

    ÔÇ£YouÔÇÖre Eugene Krabs?ÔÇØ Plankton muttered, in shock. The two then looked away and started they journey in rivalry.

    Spin-Off/Lit Reviews!

    in Davy Jones' Locker

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    The Field Trip C-

    I agree with 70sguy. Show and Tell was good but Field Trip, but this lacked in pretty much everything. While I was reading this episode I was thinking in my head, "Wow. This is pretty bad." It didn't hold my attention at all. In fact it took me thirty minutes to read it because I got so bored. Sorry man, but this wasn't the best episode so far. 305752.gif

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