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  1. Epi.2 - "Visiting(Part two)"

    As Spongebob and Patrick approached the inner door of the Treedome, the water was drained, and the two slipped on their helmets. The inner door opened by its own, followed by the loud noise the goes with it. Spongebob stepped through the threshold which began the plastic dome, with the micro-phoned teddy bear behind his back. Patrick ran to his side, whispering, "Don't forget, pinky up!"

    Spongebob nudged him away, realizing the humor (or just stupidity)of his friend. He then looked around the dome for Sandy, his blue eyes with a worried expression. He looked back for Patrick, who was doing his own thing at the bird bath. Spongebob laughed at the sight of his friend almost drowning the birds. When he turned back, he Spotted Sandy leaving the treehouse with a stack of large books in her hands.

    "Sandy!" Spongebob shouted.

    "Ahh!" Sandy's reaction to a possible intruder made her drop her books on her foot, leaving her screaming this time of pain. Sandy was on the floor now, rubbing the pain from her foot.

    "Uhh sorry Sandy."

    Sandy's eyes shot at him with a fiery hatred glare. Spongebob realized, however, how quickly it went away.

    "Oh it's just you, Spongebob."

    "Hey, Sandy! How's it going?"

    "And Patrick" Spongebob added.

    Sandy barely acknowledged him, just the fact that the bird bath was empty of water, birds, and was even fallen on its side. She just sighed, though. It was easily noticeable that she was trying to keep it together.

    "Listen, y'all caught me at a bad time"

    "Well watcha doing?" Patrick asked, not realizing Sandy's distress.

    Sandy stood back up, picking up the large science books one by one. "I'm trying to create something that will fulfill my need of oxygen without inhaling," She explained.

    "What does that mean?" Spongebob asked, clueless about this whole "oxygen" business.

    "So I could breathe under water without a helmet," she explained further.

    Patrick shot up with joy of the assignment. "I wanna help, I wanna help!"

    Spongebob playfully elbowed him. "Patrick, you know you couldn't help Sandy with anything," Spongebob said, rather loud. Sandy stared at the two in discomfort, and then started bursting out laughing. Spongebob joined her. Patrick, outnumbered, glowed red instead of his usually pink shade, and turned away. "I'll show you" he mumbled as e left the Treedome.

    Sandy looked at Patrick's expression as he left. "Maybe you should go talk with him," She suggested.

    "Oh he'll be fine. But, there's something I need to tell you." He said, confident.

    "Oh, I'm sorry SpongeBob, I just don't have time to talk right now. Maybe another time?"

    "Oh" Spongebob's happy expression quickly turned into a sad one.

    "Sorry, I'm way too busy right now." Sandy said, walking away with the books in her hands.

    "Okay" Spongebob dropped the micro-phoned teddy bear under the picnic table, and left.

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  2. Epi.1 "Visiting (Part one)"

    "Thanks for stopping by, Patrick," Spongebob said to his best friend.

    "No problem, so what's on your mind?" Patrick responded, relaxing on Spongebob's red chair while enjoying a glass of fresh seahorse milk.

    "Spongebob sat himself on his own green sofa. "I need some advice with my relationship with Sandy."

    "And?" Patrick waited for further explanation.

    "Well isn't it obvious, Pat?"

    Patrick blankly stared at the sponge, hinting the answer of "no"

    Spongebob sighed. "I I think I like her"

    "And?"

    Spongebob made a face." Well what should I do? Should I tell her?"

    "Well yeah."

    "But, Patrick, what if Sandy doesn't like me back? It would be too awkward being friends with her" he slumped in his seat.

    "Look, Spongebob, all you have to do is bring her a gift when you tell her, she'll fall in love with you."

    "Really?" Spongebob's head shot up.

    "Of course! Trust me, I know a lot about girls." He chugged down another gulp of seahorse milk. He even knew he was lying. "If anything, I'll be by your side." He added.

    You could see excitement from Spongebob's tone. "Thank you, Patrick! You're a genius!"

    Patrick placed the empty glass on the table and got up. "Okay Spongebob, let's go."

    Spongebob made a confused look. "Go where?"

    Patrick patted Spongebob. "To Sandy's of course."

    "You mean right now?"

    Patrick pulled him up. "If not now, then when, Spongebob?" Patrick said with no intent of an answer. He nudged him forward. "Let's go, pal!"

    "Alright, I trust you with this one."

    "Hold on, where's your gift?"

    "I'll just buy flowers along the way."

    "No,no,no, Spongebob. You've got to tell Sandy before the sun sets. We don't have time. You have to have anything you could give her around the house."

    Spongebob, with a sigh, looked around the pineapple house for anything decent. He stumbled upon an old trunk of crazy things he had used during his lifetime. He picked up random things from the chest, one being a squirrel mask, the same one he had used to try to get Sandy to stop going after the Alaskan Bull Worm. What would Sandy need of this? She is a squirrel. He tossed it aside and dug more into the chest. Spongebob picked up his old sweatband, the one Sandy had given him. She already has many of these, so it placed it back. He finally picked up a brown teddy bear with buttons replacing it's eyes. It also had a microphone "sewn" on the arm of the bear, but Spongebob didn't seem to notice it. In haste, he grabbed it and sped downstairs to meet Patrick.

    "Okay Pat. I'm ready!"

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    After Note: Do you recognize the teddy bear?

  3. Uhh... example? I agree about your other points though.

    Miley Cyrus is a prime example of Stars and pop sensations that do controversial things such as taking naked/scandalous photo's and pictures when they are supposed to be role models for kids.

    EDIT:We posted simultaneously Doogle. 428899.gif

  4. Team Spongebob Ep.21 "Linda"- Great episode,I'm interested in the potential relationship between Linda and Spongebob. Great action also.

    Final Grade: A+

    Team Spongebob :Ep.22 "Squid Vs. Pat"

    Not as good as "Linda",the ending felt rushed. Still,decent episode.

    Final Grade: B

  5. *cracks knuckles*

    With pleasure. It's what I do best.

    Well... I terminate them best. But this is like that. I terminate your spirit.

    Now that wasn't painful at all 428899.gif . When ya get to be a tough gal like me,pain becomes pleasure,sweet heart. 239236.gif

  6. It is all primarily teenybopper trash that brainwashes preteens into liking the next pop or webisode sensation that would turn right around and do something incredibly dumb like break up over a text message or get naked when they're idolized by kids who shouldn't be even seeing them in their undergarments yet, if at all. As for primetime, that's non-existant, with reality TV hogging all the spotlight there. The final nail in the coffin is when stations defy their purpose (CN airing live-action, Nick and Disney being tailored to just teens and the lowest common demographic, Nick-at-Nite and TVLand airing shows that still air locally instead of the classics, et al), thus making them insufferable.

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