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    The Misunderstood Life of Doodlebob

    in Davy Jones' Locker

    Posted

    Had some okay parts, but not that good. I think you should go back to Squidlerd and Fred the Fish.

    I'm still writing JOF, I haven't abandoned it, I just wanted to try something different then what I have been doing so far in all my spin-offs and. Insted of long overreaching storylnes, and dark-like humor, I wanted to try something more lighthearted and simple. It's not always going to be like this, where he's in Elem. school and he deals with lttle bottomfeeders and such. He'll get older, and I'll change the style and humor it's written if you don't like it, then just don't read it, and don't be like "Go back to doing Fred" because I haven't abandoned it yet, and all it does is make me irritated at the people who critizing my work.

    This show is okay, but I think everyone should stop telling him what to write. He can write whatever he likes to write. 630566.gif

    ^ This person is a very wise user 630566.gif

    The Misunderstood Life of Doodlebob

    in Davy Jones' Locker

    Posted

    Episode 2A: Special Education

    In the first quarter of 2nd Grade, Doodlebob ad already 3 F's, 2 D's, and 2 C-'s. His mom increased the amount of whipping that occured in the house, and it made Doodlebob barely able to stand up. He couldn't get an homework done to the fact that his hand was broken almost entirely due to the mass whipping at the house. He was actually happier at school then at home, "because of the fact that he could actually walk and talk and laugh, and not be knocked down by some bitch" as bob put it to hisbest friend, Dodle Rick.

    Doodle Rick- Wow, whata mutherfookin biotch yo mama is!

    Doodlebob- Rick, talk in noral english language, before I fucking slit you.

    Doodle Rick- Sorrah, joost sayin yo mama's a-

    Doodlebob pulls out an eraser.

    Doodle Rick- Never mind.

    Doodlebob- Thats what I thought.

    PDA- Doodlebob to the principals office immediately.

    Doodlebob then arrives to find his mother and a strange woman talking in idle conversation.

    ???- Doodlebob you are being put in the special education program for children with disabilities.

    Doodlebob- WHAT! WHY?

    ???- Well your failing grades are red flags that tell us you need help, so this will make the workload easier.

    Doodlebob- Oh ok.

    Doodlemom- And you'll have a new teacher named mrs. Blowpuff. She's nice and considerate.

    Doodlebob- Ok then, I shall the class tomorrow.

    ???- No rtard, your joining it now.

    The 2 stare at the woman for a minute before they go to the classroom. Doodle was happy that he didn't get whipped that night 630566.gif

    End of A.

    Episode 2B: Those Damned Bottomfeeders

    Doodlebob was happy that it was finally the weekend, where he could just relax and do nothing for once, as the special ed kids have no homework on weekends. He was getting ready to play outside when his mom forced him to clean up his room. He went to make his bed when he decide to lay on it...

    Doodlebob- WOAH! WHAT THE HELL!?

    Doodlebob was sucked into the mattress and was free falling for several minutes before finally hitting the ground.

    Doodlebob- Where am I?

    ???- Your in the land of the Bottomfeeders!

    Doodlebob- What the heck?

    Jeb- We made a colony of Bottomfeeders in the insides of your bed. I'm jeb and I'm the leader of the bottomfeeders, Jeb.

    Doodlebob- I need to goback up to the light please.

    Jeb- Ok, use our teleporter.

    So Doodlebob went back up to the light and got a stink bomb out of his closet, and ended the civilization of the Bottomfeeders, therefore ending a secret century of technological advanement that the sponge's never knew of.

    End of B.

    The Misunderstood Life of Doodlebob

    in Davy Jones' Locker

    Posted

    Episode 1A: Beginnings

    Doodlebob was waking up at about 7:20 AM. He was excited for his first day of Doodle school. He was 8 years old at the time. He was so excited to finally get away from his mother's harsh homeschooling. He remembers how she treated him during that time.

    (Flashback)

    Doodle mom- Now, whats X= in 3X+7

    Doodlebob- Umm, 3.45?

    Doodle mom- Wrong!

    Then proceeds to whip him repeatedly. By the time she's finished, his sides are somewhat bleeding, and his face is covered in tears.

    Doodle mom- Now whats the answer?

    Doodlebob- 2.45!?

    Doodle mom- Good, you can sleep in your bed tonight.

    (Flashback ends)

    Doodle mom- Have a good day, honey.

    Doodlebob- EEEK!!!!

    Doodle then gets to school, and is happy to learn that they have the same class together, he's kind of happy. Then he gets to class.

    Doodle mom- Hello students I am your new teacher. You will address me as mother.

    Doodlebob- NOOOOOO!

    End of A.

    Episode 1B: Right before "Beginnings"

    Your probablly wondering how the hell doodlebob ended up in any school at all, or how he even exists after "Frankendoodle." Well now thats what this episode is for.

    Doodlebob- Ouch, my goddam... I mean goshdang leg! It's broken!

    Doodlebob had just been erased from Bikini Bottom, and was sent to the world of Forgotten Ideas, where all ideas that have been erased from existance are sent to live in. Doodle then limped over to a house on the closest street... turned out it was a dog pound for angry dogs, and the dogs started running after him. Doodle ran as fast as he could, but the dogs eventually caught up with him and were about to chew him up to death when suddenly...

    ???- Back away bitches! Back away!

    The dogs immediately backed away. Doodlebob backed out of his corner and went up to lady that basiclly saved his life.

    Doodlebob- Who, who are you?

    Doodlemom- I'm just an ordinary doodle like you, but you can call me mom.

    Doodlebob- Ok, mom.

    And for the first time in his young drawn life, Doodlebob had someone who actually cared for him. If only he knew of the trials that awaited him.

    End of B

    The Journey of Fred the Fish

    in Davy Jones' Locker

    Posted

    This episode was guest written by Firion/Luke 525

    Episode 5: Fred's Dream

    The next day Fred had been released from the hospital. His arm was still weak and he limped to his apartment. He then turned on the television, to hear a breaking news announcement...

    TV- Breaking news here, a suspect involved in yesterday's mayoral shooting as escaped police custody in a bizzare turn of events-

    Fred turned off the television. He was very worried about Melissa, and had been growing paranoid that something bad would happen to him.

    Fred (to himself)- I'm going insane from this! Melissa is going to be captured by the authorities! I'm so scared! Why is this happening to me?!

    Suddenly, Fred felt a searing pain in his leg.

    Fred-Neptune damn it! That's it! I can't live like this! I need something to relieve me of this pain!

    He limped to his bedroom and grabbed a bottle of painkillers that he had taken back at the hospital. He opened it, poured eight of the tablets on his hand, and swallowed them dry. He didn't care, he was fretting and more stressed than he had ever been. He started feeling woozy, and crashed on his bed. Before he knew it, he was dead asleep, and began to dream...

    In his dream, Fred saw a vision of a court room. He could also see two people arguing. He couldn't make out what they looked like, but he could hear their debate.

    ???- Although you have an interesting theory, you don't have a scrap of evidence to prove this claim!

    ???- And that's where your wrong. I do have evidence. I present this fryer. It has certain stains on it. When he came close, you finished him off you bastard.

    Fred-What the hell is this?

    Then, he saw another image. He could see a black figure with a sharp object. The black figure slammed the object down, and blood splattered. Fred was sweating and he could barely speak.

    Fred-Ah... ahh..

    The last vision he saw was Melissa standing over someone's bed holding a gun.

    Melissa- Don't worry, it'll all be over soon.

    Melissa fired the gun, and Fred woke up from his dream screaming.

    Fred- AWAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Fred looked at himself. He had chills, and he was coverd in sweat.

    Fred- Was that... a vision... of my death?!

    Fred put his fin on his forehead.

    Fred(nervously)- What am I going to do?

    The Writer's Lounge

    in SpongeBob's Library

    Posted

    I have an idea for a spin-off. If you don't like it, please give me your honest opinion and/or suggestions how to make it better. Here it is.

    A corrupted Sandy uses her science and abilities to assassinate King Neptune, and becomes ruler of Bikini Bottom. Spongebob, with the help of his allies, sets out to stop her.

    Interesting, and dramatic. I wonder why Sandy changes, hope to this turn out good.

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